Well........not to be mean but productive... Either the wrists and arms should be angled down more.... or lift the shoulders. Either way it would make it look right.

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Finally Constructive criticism, where were you awhile ago... either way thanks. The wrists did bother me but i did not no what, thank you for pointing it out.

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Da nada...

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Well, unless you are going for the black sketchy lines as a style, I suggest you blend them more. It seems you use the black lines not only as your "holding" lines, but as a replacement for deep shadows. You use them instead of adding a deep blackish brown in some areas that could use that sort of shading instead of some lines. And if you want realism [not sure if you do or don't] then maybe either the face or the hands need to be out of focus? Annndddd lastly, hmm... I think you need a more varied colour pallet. If you like this colour for skin tone, there should also be some reds and pinks and yellows to balance it out. If you look at a photograph or someone in half light you'll see that maybe the shadows have a blue tint or that the sunlight can make a piece of their skin orange or yellow
Just look around.. Thats what I do. You can look at more experienced artists' pictures for reference with out actually copying them. I look to many artists for how they shade or the colours they use, and it really helps Or just get reference from a photo for skintones, and theres plenty of tutorials on deviantart here for something to think about.

I hope this helped you Lemme know. I'll do it anytime for you steve

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thanks that is alot of help! You should critique more often. Sadly your are some of the small bunch that actually does constructive criticism around here. Your a cool gal!

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no prob just let me know if you need it. I try my best

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OK Kewl

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